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Jeannie Prinsen's avatar

"There’s a moment (just after you’ve closed whatever book you’ve been reading and before you’ve gotten up to move) when you take a breath and the world swims with stillness and possibility..."

Yes, this is so true! I've felt it so many times. I love this post, thank you.

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Steve Edwards's avatar

🙏🙏

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Kellie Brown's avatar

I felt that you were describing me when you said you would weep to think of an hour reading. And then all the other stuff about to do lists, and swallowing rage, etc. Oh yes. I forced myself to take a break today and began scribbling down a poem that might never get beyond the scribble phase. It starts with a question: When will I not be tired?

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Steve Edwards's avatar

Excellent 🙌🙌

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Jed Moffitt's avatar

This is really good, Steve ...

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Steve Edwards's avatar

Thanks, Jed! Appreciate how you always get it.

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Elizabeth Fletcher's avatar

“A sense that everything was beautiful and tragic in equal proportions, including me and my life, and in the end we’d all be ok even if we weren’t.”

This exactly, all my life.

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Steve Edwards's avatar

❤️❤️

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Gail Morgan's avatar

Enjoyed your post very much. Time to restart. Put your dishes off for an hour. And read like you used to.

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Steve Edwards's avatar

❤️❤️

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Jeff Berryman's avatar

Beautiful work here. Hoping you get an hour to read soon…I’m older and have the privilege of having some of those hours. It’s a salve for sure. Your writing, so real. Thank you.

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Steve Edwards's avatar

Many thanks, Jeff!

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Melanie Bettinelli's avatar

Now— that moment when

it's too dark to read. Be still.

The night draws in close.

I love this reflection. Thank you for sharing the redbrick schoolhouse and the piles of books and the late spring loneliness.

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Steve Edwards's avatar

Thank you for reading! 🙏

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Mary Dansak's avatar

Oh my. Yes, horses are still good. Once again, you nailed it.

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Steve Edwards's avatar

Didn’t have to tell you that! 😅

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Adam Cox's avatar

Nice to know I'm not the only one who feels like I haven't done enough. That's a neat trick the mind pulls, to make you feel a common thing and believe it must be you alone who suffers.

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Steve Edwards's avatar

Absolutely.

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Kirby Erickson's avatar

Your words are magic to me…soothing and brightly shining.

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Jeannie Ewing's avatar

Steve,

The segment you wrote about being in midlife and wanting to weep when you consider an uninterrupted hour to read--totally relatable. Also the chores. And the existential question of, have I done enough?

I want to tell you that reading your poem reminded me today of David Whyte's "Winter Apple." Beautiful, as always. Glad to be in the trenches with you, excavating stories of goodness and peace in the midst of such incessant turmoil.

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Steve Edwards's avatar

❤️🙏❤️🙏❤️

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School of Blue's avatar

I am so glad you write about this kind of loneliness. Thank you. In the poetry and your observations about the state of things, the worry of it all, we can feel less alone. Your piece has brought a stillness here in this room.

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Steve Edwards's avatar

So glad to hear it.

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Terri Windling's avatar

This is an absolutely beautiful post, Steve. Thank you.

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Steve Edwards's avatar

Thank you, Terri. Means the world.

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Jennifer Barnabee's avatar

Your words are a balm. Thank you.

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Steve Edwards's avatar

🙏🙏 thank you

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Jeannine's avatar

Steve, I know exactly what you are writing about, reading until the light is gone, making it impossible to continue! This is a beautiful post, be it heart-wrenching and melancholic. Do take time to read again until the light fades, at least once in awhile. (Life really is too short not to.)

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Steve Edwards's avatar

Yes! Thank you.

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David Kirkby's avatar

Hi Steve

This is a thoughtful, gentle post to read in my early morning here. (Not Australia right now - currently in Rotorua, Aetearoa).

Having just spent some time reading about the madness in the world overnight, your words are a good reminder to me that many of us feel like this.

I recently made myself rearrange my priorities and spend some time reading actual "books." The online world - even Substack - does retrain us towards short attention spans. So an hour or so a day is what I aim for, immersing myself in something sustained and mind engaging. Not managing that right now - but my excuse is that I'm travelling, and there is so much to see and do.

I loved the poem, too. You recreate that sense of loneliness extremely well..

Best Wishes from over the big lake - Dave :)

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Steve Edwards's avatar

Thank you for such a thoughtful reply. Totally agree about real books vs the online world. So glad you got some time recently! Also nice to know you’re traveling!

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